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第一篇六级写作解析：动力和方法在学习上的重要性
【真题】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of motivation and methods in learning. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【范文】
What is the most important quality for learning? From my perspective, what we need are motivation and methods.
Motivation refers to desire and determination in people to be continually interested in and committed to certain aims. It is an indispensable part of learning. If we want to complete heavy school work, motivation is a necessity. Without motivation, it is hard to overcome difficulties. The inventor of the electric bulb, one of the famous scientists in the world, Thomas Edison, is a good case in point. Before the bulb came into being, he had failed thousands of times. With motivation, he finally lit the whole world.
With motivation we also need proper methods to study efficiently. Generally speaking, the more effectively you study, the greater success you will achieve. Method is a great element of learning. Without proper methods, we may go nowhere in our pursuit of success in study.
In a word, motivation and methods play a vital role in successful study. The same is true of other aspects of our life, such as friendship, love and career. As the saying goes:” Motivation is what gets you started. Methods are what helps you keep going.”
【解析】
本篇作文属于话题类作文，题目难度比较大，要求考生就“动力和方法在学习上的重要性”写一篇作文。像这类作文，我们可以在第一段引出动力和方法这个话题，然后在二三段具体论证动力和方法的重要性，可选取举例论证、排比论证、正反说理论证等方法论证说理，最末段再次重申观点，进行总结与升华。
第二篇六级作文：人际交往中相互理解和尊重的重要性
【真题】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【范文】
Everyone in the world cannot live without interacting with other people. I argue that mutual understanding and respect are indispensable to maintain genuine interpersonal relationship.
As competition in all fields grows increasingly fierce, nobody can achieve success in his life without the assistance of his partners. Take basketball hero Jordan for an instance, he can slam the dunk smartly because of contribution and assistance of his teammates. If people work separately, they will only suffer from frail minds and limited resources. It is a happy thing to understand and respect others in interpersonal relationships. Mutual understanding and respect can make people popular among others; mutual understanding and respect can bring hearts full of love; mutual understanding and respect can make people wise and benevolent. Without mutual understanding or respect, people cannot get along well with others.
Let us try our best to be people who can understand and respect others for understanding and respecting others is making ourselves understood and respected.
【解析】
本篇作文属于话题类作文，要求我们就“人际交往中相互理解和尊重的重要性”作文。像这类题目的作文，我们可以在第一段引出相互理解和尊重这个话题，然后在后续的段落具体论证相互理解和尊重的重要性，最后再次重申论点，升华主旨。范文使用了举例论证与排比论证，结尾段发出倡议。
第三篇六级写作解析：团队精神及沟通在工作中的重要性
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of team spirit and communication in the workplace. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
One of the problems both people and corporation face today is self-isolation and information loss, and many feel there is a great need for team spirit and communication. I believe that working together and communicating with each other offer the best solution to the world’s pressing matters.
Firstly, team spirit and communication help to deal with information loss. A group share information by working together and communication. Among all the touching facts relating to this topic, the most impressive one is Bill Gates and Allen. Without teamwork and communication, how could it be possible for Microsoft corporation to achieve success? Second, team spirit and communication are beneficial to staff who do not have opportunity to speak all day long staring at the PC. Working with others gives them a chance to speak and prevent their speaking skills from deteriorate. More importantly, team spirit and communication help to create an amicable working atmosphere. By consulting problems with others, the moderate and friendly atmosphere is thus created.
Overall, team spirit and communication is beneficial in that they eliminate barriers to information loss, and improve the relationship between colleagues as well as the working atmosphere. Team spirit and communication are therefore an essential measure, the effects of which will be felt far and wide.
【解析】
本篇作文属于话题类作文，要求我们就团队精神及沟通在工作中的重要性写一篇作文。像这类话题类作文，我们可以在第一段引出这个话题，并表明自己的态度。然后在第二段具体论证团队精神和沟通在工作中的重要性，我们可以分一下领域，比如工作相关的问题本身，员工个人能力，工作氛围等，来论证团队合作和沟通对工作的重要性，最后在第三段进行总结，并把第二段中论证的三个优点整理并简要提及即可。
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